Feedback

After previewing all of the other group's trailers we all gave each other good and bad feedback before making changes to our work.

These are the results we recieved.

Good:

• Fast cuts
• Shows a certain amount of information but doesn't give the plot away.
• Scene in the studio
• Dark shots/night time
• Shot on the stairs/at the mirror
• Screaming
• Acting
• Establishing shot of location
• Trapped in a haunted house
• Headlight shot
• Lighting
• Tragic past coming back to haunt you
• Mysterious
• Hand sliding down the door shot

Bad:

• Shot of main girl at the sink
• Don't understand the relevance of last shot.
• Delete the talking bit at the end that shouldn't be there
• Improve text/titles
• Lack of variety of shot types
• Sound could vary
• Production company logo needed
• Unsure about the plot
• People crawling
• Need more titles about the other people in the trailer. E.g the ghosts etc.
• Unclear shots
• Not very pacey
• Hand sliding shot was too long